I want Up
I don’t
want to
be just
another scribbler
sprawled
down here
I saw you
climb up there.
Help me up
as I help myself up.
I want up, I want up. I want up.
© 2008 Elisha Gay C. Hidalgo. All rights reserved.
Original Photo Title “I want up” uploaded by familyof8 at Flickr (click photo to follow link). This is a free verse I did.
Categories: Poetry
Tagged: Art, Children, creative writing exercise, elisha gay cundangan, elisha gay hidalgo, i want up, Life, Photography, Poetry, Reflections, Thoughts, word prompts, Writing, writing from pictures, writing prompts
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2 responses so far ↓
vivien reyes // May 19, 2008 at 1:23 am
thats a nice little piece of script demonstrating your eagerness to improve and become a success in this pursuit.smple but with a deep meaning to it.
shasha // May 19, 2008 at 5:24 pm
just like an eager child wanting something without wondering why…